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[January 27, 2012, 10:35:48 AM] Raven: dont mean to bitter pater?

[January 27, 2012, 10:36:08 AM] Raven: just pitter patter like feats

[January 27, 2012, 10:37:01 AM] Raven: hey pater i have some poems for you to talk shit on

[January 27, 2012, 10:37:12 AM] Raven: be really mean and shit

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[January 27, 2012, 10:40:48 AM] Raven: or in brokelyn lingo harry ploter

[January 27, 2012, 10:46:17 AM] Raven: Been reading your new poems pater you on a yeats trip i like it?

[January 30, 2012, 12:49:57 PM] Raven: everyone has a great poem just tell your story in a special way I you will feel you much better

[January 30, 2012, 12:50:51 PM] Raven: these people get so good at writing poems they forget how to tell the story

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Ernest Hemingway
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« on: January 29, 2008, 11:05:52 PM »
Had to stop for a few minutes after I'd read this one. This guy's done it the hard way. He's sat in front of that piece of paper, gone mad with rage at this crazy human existence, and come out the other side. He's lived it.

"My poems are/ replacements/ for that fatal/ knotted loop"

Terrifying and inspiring.

Keyserrrrr.
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Stanley Kubrick
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« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2008, 06:21:54 PM »
i agree, i thought it worked really with the rope metaphor and he doesnt seem to waste a sentence. brilliant,
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