Poem From New Issue'A Bad Time On The Old Line'-Brett Kelly

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Poem From New Issue'A Bad Time On The Old Line'-Brett Kelly

« on: January 31, 2008, 12:46:39 PM »

Wot yall think?
Goode?
Bad???

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Re: Poem From New Issue'A Bad Time On The Old Line'-Brett Kelly

« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2008, 06:19:57 PM »

i thought it was great. i think it's one of your best. its a good social comment and i liked the rhythm and the way it weaves in and out itself like life does.


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