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[January 09, 2012, 09:35:14 PM] Ploe: That I could!

[January 27, 2012, 10:34:49 AM] Raven: I want to say hello and I want to say i was piter pater in the mean time ... god I love to piter pater i miss it so much

[January 27, 2012, 10:35:48 AM] Raven: dont mean to bitter pater?

[January 27, 2012, 10:36:08 AM] Raven: just pitter patter like feats

[January 27, 2012, 10:37:01 AM] Raven: hey pater i have some poems for you to talk shit on

[January 27, 2012, 10:37:12 AM] Raven: be really mean and shit

[January 27, 2012, 10:38:07 AM] Raven: I need pater on my platter

[January 27, 2012, 10:38:16 AM] Raven: a big dose

[January 27, 2012, 10:40:48 AM] Raven: or in brokelyn lingo harry ploter

[January 27, 2012, 10:46:17 AM] Raven: Been reading your new poems pater you on a yeats trip i like it?

[January 30, 2012, 12:49:57 PM] Raven: everyone has a great poem just tell your story in a special way I you will feel you much better

[January 30, 2012, 12:50:51 PM] Raven: these people get so good at writing poems they forget how to tell the story

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Author Topic: Story from Issue 20. French Phrases by Matt Pecina.  (Read 1210 times)
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« on: January 29, 2008, 11:38:29 AM »

Love the swamp of sensuality that covers this. That sense of being in bed with a lover and seeing nothing else, yet at the same time your mind being elsehwere, on past lovers and on how this relationship will pan out. That knowledge that who you are is really down to the people you've met.

The knowledge that it ends.

Seductive, this story.

Carter.
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« Reply #1 on: January 29, 2008, 10:57:19 PM »

Dammit, but I agree here too. This is worrying.

This girl knows what's going on, he knows she knows what's going on, but they think 'fuck it' and keep going with each other anyway. This is what relationships are like... flawed people doing their best to make it work.

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