The Tree Built Into the Rock challenge

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Alex Austin

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Re: The Tree Built Into the Rock challenge

« Reply #25 on: April 13, 2008, 01:59:07 AM »

I like it, Keyser. Swift, bleak and true.

Alex


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Re: The Tree Built Into the Rock challenge

« Reply #26 on: April 18, 2008, 11:21:35 AM »

Quote from: moneycash on April 09, 2008, 10:28:10 PM

i like how you put that trees die too.

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p.s. i hate TV commercials that make me contemplate my own mortality, but i love poems that do the same thing. strange, eh?

Quote from: Alex Austin on April 13, 2008, 01:59:07 AM

I like it, Keyser. Swift, bleak and true.

Thanks for the kudos, fellas. It's appreciated.

Know what you mean, Monaaaaaay. Maybe the reason is that poems make you contemplate your mortality and place in the universe, while TV ads appear to do that while really reaching into your jeans and stealing your wallet.

Keyserrrrr.


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