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Will
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« on: March 05, 2008, 07:45:02 PM »

Here are a few pictures my father took on his California vacation...the asshole. 




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« Reply #1 on: March 05, 2008, 09:08:05 PM »

i really like the first one because i see that tree as like a permanent person to that cliff. i've always wanted to go to cali.
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« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2008, 03:17:08 PM »

i really like the first one because i see that tree as like a permanent person to that cliff. i've always wanted to go to cali.

Yeah, the tree's like a sentry, waiting and watching for - what? Could be a piece of writing in this. Depending on the age of the tree, it could have seen many things. The original inhabitants of the land, the coming of European settlers, the gold rush, the rise of reagan, the rise of surf culture, modern humanity's retreat into fantasy - the list goes on.

How about it, Will, a poem to accompany your photo?

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« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2008, 03:50:18 PM »

A great idea of which I would have never thought.  I have a few things I scribbled down yesterday that I want to compose first.  But you seem to have captured the essence of the photo very well...might you give it a shot too?
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« Reply #4 on: March 06, 2008, 04:07:42 PM »

A great idea of which I would have never thought.  I have a few things I scribbled down yesterday that I want to compose first.  But you seem to have captured the essence of the photo very well...might you give it a shot too?

I accept the challenge, Will! How about we both go away and have a hack at it, and then when we're ready jointly post what we've come up with? A poetic face-off, if you will.

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« Reply #5 on: March 06, 2008, 04:12:43 PM »

A splendid idea indeed.  Maybe we can get some more folks in on this as well.
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« Reply #6 on: March 06, 2008, 06:52:31 PM »

its sparked off something great! this is brilliant.
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« Reply #7 on: March 06, 2008, 11:33:44 PM »

A splendid idea indeed.  Maybe we can get some more folks in on this as well.

Which is in turn a splendid idea. Since the inspiration for this comes from your photo, maybe you could post this in 'The Agora' section and we could get more people involved? I wouldn't be so presumptuous. Wink

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« Reply #8 on: March 09, 2008, 05:25:50 PM »

   
     Hey I'm up for that, by the way that tree is near Carmel valley on the Big Sur coast I've been there it happens to be one of the most photographed trees in the world and from what I heard it is very old like one maybe two hundred years old   
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« Reply #9 on: March 09, 2008, 07:39:42 PM »

(secretly, i could write for days on that first one... it's very desolate and lonely feeling... i enjoy it.)
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« Reply #10 on: March 09, 2008, 07:43:56 PM »

So lovely to see you here ~vxn~.
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« Reply #11 on: March 09, 2008, 07:55:46 PM »

thank you for the invite...
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« Reply #12 on: March 09, 2008, 11:08:19 PM »

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« Reply #13 on: March 13, 2008, 01:14:14 PM »

I like the color in the second photograph, maybe how the green and blue are near eah other.. hmm..
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« Reply #14 on: March 13, 2008, 01:18:06 PM »

I like the color in the second photograph, maybe how the green and blue are near eah other.. hmm..

and the fog, the bridge off in the distance...it's my fave too
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« Reply #15 on: March 13, 2008, 04:42:02 PM »

Of course Big Sur...that's why I was getting that Kerouacian feel.
A lone sentry on the last few inches of America...and after that the Graet Orient...It's beautiful!!!
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