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Author Topic: A verse a day: 'The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam'.  (Read 11855 times)
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« Reply #25 on: October 27, 2008, 12:59:40 PM »

What did high piping mean back in the 11th century (or wherever in time we're at)?  I also wonder if the Rose in the 5th and 6th verses are the same thing.  It seems as though the speaker is ready to do some drinking and is urging everybody to hurry the hell up.   
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« Reply #26 on: October 29, 2008, 12:13:56 AM »

What did high piping mean back in the 11th century (or wherever in time we're at)?  I also wonder if the Rose in the 5th and 6th verses are the same thing.  It seems as though the speaker is ready to do some drinking and is urging everybody to hurry the hell up.   

Yeah, I think it's from the 11th Century, or the early 12th. I took 'high piping' to be read as 'high, piping', in other words the language has a sing-song quality when spoken. Though a rose then was probably the same as it is now, I'm willing to bet that the symbolism is different: what a rose signifies to us, the myths and qualities connected with it, may be quite different to what a rose signified for a person from the 11th Century. And you're right, there does seem to be an air of potentiality about all this: somebody's gearing up for something!

Oh, and apologies for nothing on this thread yesterday, but I only remembered when I was at the UD music night in Sheffield. Too drunk when I came home. Rather than double up today, I'll just post one verse. I think this thing of posting and then commenting is working.

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« Reply #27 on: October 29, 2008, 12:18:33 AM »

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And look - a thousand Blossoms with the Day
Woke - and a thousand scatter'd into Clay:
  And this first Summer Month that brings the Rose
Shall take Jamshyd and Kaikobad away.
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« Reply #28 on: October 29, 2008, 12:26:11 AM »

Kaikobad: another mythical king.

I wonder if Clay has a special meaning here, referring to the clay from which humans were supposedly formed? Given this and the existential themes already apparent, could the rose be here (and in this verse especially) as a symbol of death and rebirth?

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« Reply #29 on: October 29, 2008, 06:33:42 PM »

Could be, although it seems spring would be more appropriate than summer for a symbol of death and rebirth (although I've no clue of the climate the author lived in).  But the last line does seem to indicate some sort of ending. 
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« Reply #30 on: October 29, 2008, 06:35:10 PM »

In other words...we're not here for long...
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« Reply #31 on: October 29, 2008, 07:06:22 PM »

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But come with old Khayyam, and leave the Lot
Of Kaikobad and Kaikhosru forgot:
  Let Rustum lay about him as he will,
Or Hatim Tai cry Supper - heed them not.
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« Reply #32 on: October 29, 2008, 07:20:48 PM »

In other words...we're not here for long...

Ain't that the truth.

Kaikhosru: another mythical king. Rustum: legendary Persian hero. Hatim Tai: notably generous and hospitable Arab from the pre-Islamic era.

Must admit, I think we're really missing something by not knowing more about these figures that are being mentioned. Their names probably had real distinction and significance for contemporaries of the author. For instance, if we refer to a pair of lovers being like Robin Hood and Marion that lends one set of associations; if Romeo and Juliet entirely another. Wonder what the stories of these figures are?

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« Reply #33 on: October 29, 2008, 08:57:35 PM »

I feel that he may be mentioning his own immortality, thanks to writing this piece.
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« Reply #34 on: October 30, 2008, 12:00:08 AM »

I feel that he may be mentioning his own immortality, thanks to writing this piece.

You might be right. Perhaps contrasting the few strands of immortality we can grasp with the dread reality of mortality?

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« Reply #35 on: October 30, 2008, 06:22:02 PM »

Must admit, I think we're really missing something by not knowing more about these figures that are being mentioned.

Me too.  All I gather is that it would be best to go with the title character. 

Cry Supper?  Does supper mean dinner here, or is it another ancient term?
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« Reply #36 on: October 30, 2008, 06:23:38 PM »



You might be right. Perhaps contrasting the few strands of immortality we can grasp with the dread reality of mortality?

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Indeed... almost a rotoscoping of life and death.
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« Reply #37 on: October 30, 2008, 08:03:01 PM »

Must admit, I think we're really missing something by not knowing more about these figures that are being mentioned.

Me too.  All I gather is that it would be best to go with the title character. 

Cry Supper?  Does supper mean dinner here, or is it another ancient term?

Unless I'm mistaken, your first thought is correct. Cry Supper probably equates to come and feast, or, nowadays, chow down, boys!

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« Reply #38 on: October 30, 2008, 08:05:48 PM »

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With me along some Strip of Herbage strown
That just divides the desert from the sown,
  Where name of Slave and Sultan scarce is known,
And pity Sultan Mahmud on his Throne.
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« Reply #39 on: October 30, 2008, 08:14:49 PM »

Couldn't find anything to show that Mahmud was a Sultan of particular significance - probably just the Sultan at the time.

Rather than the image of fellowship given by earlier references to a tavern, this verse seems to be shifting things towards a withdrawal from society, to the margins. He suggests a place neither desert nor cultivated, where neither the exalted nor the oppressed are known, one where power (as represented by Sultan Mahmud) means nothing. A place apart from everything and everyone.

This really is a complete withdrawal, isn't it? But to what end? And how does it fit the earlier images of living life before it goes, which will be all too quickly?

Curiouser and curiouser, said Alice...

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« Reply #40 on: October 30, 2008, 08:31:07 PM »

Strip of Herbage-makes me think of the reefer.  When some friends and I used to get toasty, we'd say "You wanna smoke some herbage?"

Where name of Slave and Sultan scarce is known,-perhaps referring to some sort of equality among men???

And pity Sultan Mahmud on his Throne.-perhaps power and responsibility are not desired???

I'm picking up on the withdrawal from society too. 

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« Reply #41 on: October 31, 2008, 03:45:49 PM »

Strip of Herbage-makes me think of the reefer.  When some friends and I used to get toasty, we'd say "You wanna smoke some herbage?"

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Where name of Slave and Sultan scarce is known,-perhaps referring to some sort of equality among men???

And pity Sultan Mahmud on his Throne.-perhaps power and responsibility are not desired???

Concur with both of these: power seems empty to Khayyam. But what isn't empty for him?

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« Reply #42 on: October 31, 2008, 03:47:57 PM »

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Here with a Loaf of Bread beneath the Bough,
A Flask of Wine, a Book of Verse - and Thou
  Beside me singing in the Wilderness -
And Wilderness is Paradise enow.
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« Reply #43 on: October 31, 2008, 03:49:38 PM »

Ah! This crystallises matters, doesn't it? With one verse we gain clarity.

'The paradise of shared solitude', as Marquez called it.

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« Reply #44 on: November 03, 2008, 02:08:23 PM »

In Verse 10 they withdrawal from society, then in Verse 11 is they are in paradise.  I guess this shared solitude is supposed to be romantic? 
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« Reply #45 on: November 06, 2008, 01:18:52 AM »

In Verse 10 they withdrawal from society, then in Verse 11 is they are in paradise.  I guess this shared solitude is supposed to be romantic? 

I'm guessing so too. Apologies for the gap in updating, by the way, but I've had the lurgie. Bad curry led to a few days in bed.  Embarrassed

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« Reply #46 on: November 06, 2008, 01:43:13 AM »

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'How sweet is mortal Sovranty!' - think some:
Others - 'How blest the Paradise to come!'
  Ah, take the Cash in hand and waive the Rest;
Oh, the brave Music of a distant Drum!
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« Reply #47 on: November 06, 2008, 06:22:58 PM »

I bought a copy of this today.
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« Reply #48 on: November 07, 2008, 12:50:56 AM »

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Look to the Rose that blows about us - 'Lo,
Laughing,' she says, 'into the World I blow:
  At once the silken Tassel of my Purse
Tear, and its Treasure on the garden throw.'
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« Reply #49 on: November 07, 2008, 12:57:16 AM »

I bought a copy of this today.

Excellent! Hope you get as much out of it as I've been doing.

The last two verses are reinforcing the sense of the correctness of withdrawing from daily distractions and focusing on real existence, whatever that is. Hopefully we'll find out. 'The brave music of a distant drum' is very interesting.

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